Paper 2

     This paper I found was more difficult for me to write.  I am not sure why I had such a hard time with this paper but it seemed I had a harder time trying to express my point.  The first paper seemed to flow really easily and seemed to just write itself almost.  I had to keep going back and reading what I had already pointed out and try to figure out what points I was trying to make.  I am still not sure why it was so hard for me.  It could have been everything I had going on at that point in time with work and everything else, but I am always busy.  Bikes, Blues, and BBQ took a lot out of me because of all of the overtime and different thing we had going on at the department.  I do believe that being about to talk to you the short time I did about my paper did help me.  I was having a lot of trouble with my introduction paragraph.  It was way to long and I could not figure out what to take out and where to cut it down.  After talking with you in class it really helped me focus on what needed to be in that paragraph.  Once I got the introduction narrowed down it made it a lot easier to construct my paper.  I still wish I could have been in class for the rest of the peer revision workshop.  I really was looking forward to it.  It seems like every time we have one of these in class something happens at work and I end up working something like 14 hours that day.  So in the future I plan on making it if at all possible to any type of revision workshop.